Wednesday, February 13, 2008

***when I Close My Eyes Comments

Rating: 2.9

Allowing the tinkling
Romance to dance
Ethereally into eternity
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Ecstatically beautiful. Superb write Debora

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John Richter 12 May 2015

Nice, beautiful write.

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Bernard Snyder 12 May 2015

An awesome poem to say the least! Very well-written Debora!

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Jasbir Chatterjee 12 May 2015

Fingers floating, Caressing spells, Across those ancient ivories, With the inspiration of Chopin...a very spell-binding poem, really..

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James B. Earley 26 June 2008

Eroticism in its finest hour! Excellent composition.

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John Tiong Chunghoo 10 April 2008

lovely write, another intellectual feast of the mind debora.

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Ernestine Northover 13 February 2008

If music be the food of love, play on. A lovely write, the night, the wine and the music, what more could one ask for. A delight to read. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Howard Johnson 13 February 2008

A most romatic write, Debora, I love the stanza About 'Inebriating, Lover's paired-hearts '.excellent.

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Original Unknown Girl 13 February 2008

Ah Debora.... this is such a lovely stringing together of words. As pretty as pearls on a necklace... HG: -) xx

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