Sunday, December 29, 2013

When I Came To You Last Comments

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When I came to stay last, my child,
What a bundle of joy you were on tiny toes!
How the time stopped for us before it filed!
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 14 November 2019

A marvelous and touching poem. Each and every stanza stands out. EXCELLENT write. Thank you for the Poet's Notes. I learned a new poetic form today. Very informative. On to my Poem List for future reference.

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Aniruddha Pathak 14 November 2019

Thank you again dear poet Rose Marie for visiting this old poem. I wrote this poem for my grand daughter who was then a toddler of 4-5 and I reminisced about the days she used to take her bottle feeds on my lap. Today I have been here at Bangalore with my son, but she is far away in a college hostel at Poona. Time flies but memories stay put. Thank you for your wonderful feedback.

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Godhra - Gujarat
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