Wednesday, May 15, 2013

When I Break Comments

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Tears that break you
Hell that shakes you
Fire exits locked
The gay kid mocked
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Suicidal Happiness
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David Wood 17 May 2013

This is a tough subject but you wrote it from the heart and its become a great poem.

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Ace Of Black Hearts 16 May 2013

Wow, that's a hard subject to broach in such a way but you did a real good job. The only person any of us have the right to judge is ourselves. For we are responsible for the body, the flesh and skin we live in. And if we are okay with it, who are you to say otherwise unless you preside to be the almighty god. Thanks for sharing such a wonderful poem.

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