Thursday, May 3, 2018

When I Believed In Fairies Comments

Rating: 5.0

Amazing were the days when I believed in unicorns!
I could fly to the places of my fantastic dreams
At a silvery beach of coconut trees where fairies danced
I was a prince who saw a princess in the sea's streams.
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A magnificent poem that captures the innocence of childhood and the realization on the true colors of life. Brilliantly penned.10

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Valsa George 07 May 2018

A detour into the innocence of childhood! Like a sponge we absorbed everything that we heard or read when we were children and our imagination was fertile with stories of fairies and demons! Those days are gone....! Now we are not ready to believe anything! A sweet write! A10

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Kelly Kurt 04 May 2018

As a child, I believed in Santa Claus. Commercialism has replaced his generosity. Reality can be very harsh.

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Kostas Lagos 04 May 2018

A poem masterfully woven!

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Khalida Bano Ali 03 May 2018

Such a lovely poem on childhood, beauty painted.

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Rus Mer 03 May 2018

a nice poem that can soothe in the midst of all din and bustles of mega life.. thank you for nice art

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Nudershada Cabanes 03 May 2018

A beautifully crafted poem Sir Akhtar. The innocence of childhood is reminisced in this poem. Unfortunately realities of life open our eyes to the things that changes our belief. That fairies and unicorns are not real and our innocence is forever lost. A big 10

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