Monday, July 7, 2014

When I Am Gone Comments

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When I am gone
I do not want you to be by my side,
I do not want you to cry,
It is useless of crying.
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Manonton Dalan 12 January 2016

they will always suffer when you're gone

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Hira Akhtar 12 July 2014

well one must hav esthetic sense to read such a meaningful poem :) its true that we know someone's value when he/she is gone and mourn but there is no use of it, because they're not going to come back.....instead, we can pray for them :) infact, we should keep our behaviour in such a way with our loved one that even if they die we don't need to repend over bad attitude towards them :) good write, keep up regards hira

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Every expression of sadness in such death bed is not useful for the person and poet says the things in such clarity of mind and expression and nice to read it.

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