Saturday, June 29, 2013

When I Am Alone Comments

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When I am alone with my people being far away
I see a myriad of my little friends who are still in my mind
A line of ants and a swarm of tiny bees and flies
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Elena Sandu 06 July 2013

Yes a very true poem, I also think to be alone here and then is important, allow us to observe. Sometimes may open a secret door of our soul.. It feels like connection... a firefly would rest on my hand. I keep my breathe and than I start to dance...Yes indeed such moments could have when alone. Thank you for share, a beautiful poem!

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Heather Wilkins 30 June 2013

Sometimes it is good to be alone to refresh ourselves. good write

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Heather Wilkins 30 June 2013

we can be in a crowd and still be alone. sometimes being alone is good to replenish our thoughts and spirit. a good read

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Hazel Durham 29 June 2013

The mind wanders to observations of creatures of this wonderful earth whose presence enrich our souls! Evocative and beautiful write!

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Valsa George 29 June 2013

': The squint eyed crow' is a beautiful observation! Yes, a crow has always a side glance! Somehow your companions sound quite interesting!

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Childhood thoughts and simple mind will bring pleasant moments in our life of worries.Very nice poem

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