Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Sunday, February 20, 2011

When I Am Alone Comments

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You were not there when needed
You had promised me when we wedded
That you will stand by me when I am alone
Even let that be heavy wind, cruel rain or cyclone
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Vyktor Ekott 20 February 2011

nice piece. I loved your rhymes and use of words. Keep writing.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 February 2011

The discontent was brewing and I had its bitter test I was trying to curb anger and not showing it at least She had decided to strike it with full force at best I feared life will be miserable to prove for the rest

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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