When I Am All Alone Poem by Nudershada Cabanes

When I Am All Alone

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My heart is calm
There is no stirring
No flutterings of wings
Just a rhythmic beating
Pulsing within my chest
I hear every rustle
The silent hum of the wind
The plucking of guitar string
The sound of of voices
Carried by the gentle breeze
I am alone with my thoughts
The discomfort on my left leg is keen
I feel a piercing pain in my heart
That comes every now and then
When I am all alone
My senses are more awake
I can feel everything with keenness
I am drawn deeper into the well of my being

Wednesday, October 4, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: life,silence,solitude
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rini Shibu 04 October 2017

Senses awake when left alone, very true we concentrate more deep into our being.. Well written

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 October 2017

There is no stirring. Heart is very calm. You are drawn deeper into the well being of comfortable life of society. Brilliant perceptional poem is shared here...10

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