Saturday, November 10, 2018

When I Comments

Rating: 5.0

When I am shattered totally
When I feel so rejected
When I am left alone in this vast world
I crave for your presence
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Susheela Alexiose
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Jaya J 11 November 2018

Another beautiful poem.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 November 2018

A beautiful poem on love having romantic expression has been astutely delineated.

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Dr Antony Theodore 10 November 2018

Let me forget the pain of loneliness As we unite as one With all purity and holiness, .always you posit human love experience into the domain of the Divine. sometimes it is difficult for the reader to understand whether you are talking about Divine love or human love. so subtle are your thoughts. tony

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Anil Kumar Panda 10 November 2018

A beautiful love poem. How you miss you love is clear from the lines that spills pain in thick. Nicely crafted with a sweet flow. Thanks for sharing. Enjoy your poems.

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