When I Poem by Susheela Alexiose

When I

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When I am shattered totally
When I feel so rejected
When I am left alone in this vast world
I crave for your presence

Come my beloved to my side
Let your wings of love cover me
Let me see the depth of your love
In your twinkling eyes

Let me hear the words of love
You utter in my ears
As you embrace me with
Your warmth and care

Let me forget the pain of loneliness
As we unite as one
With all purity and holiness

Let me lie down peacefully
As tears of joy soak your hairy chest
And your hands shield my weeping heart

Saturday, November 10, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: loneliness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jaya J 11 November 2018

Another beautiful poem.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 November 2018

A beautiful poem on love having romantic expression has been astutely delineated.

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Dr Antony Theodore 10 November 2018

Let me forget the pain of loneliness As we unite as one With all purity and holiness, .always you posit human love experience into the domain of the Divine. sometimes it is difficult for the reader to understand whether you are talking about Divine love or human love. so subtle are your thoughts. tony

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Anil Kumar Panda 10 November 2018

A beautiful love poem. How you miss you love is clear from the lines that spills pain in thick. Nicely crafted with a sweet flow. Thanks for sharing. Enjoy your poems.

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