He was thrown
Like a tin can
Kicked akin to a piece of slipper
Crushed beyond recognition
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A hurt or an insult would bring the best efforts from some persons. Revenge doesn't recognize mercy. Good poem on true life 10+
The hurt catapulted him Into a warrior Wounded everyone No one could stand against For he showed no mercy........impressive lines with fine theme. Beautiful poem on revenge nicely executed. Thanks for sharing.
The poem When Hurt Lingers is a creative and compelling composition that eloquently expresses the revenge motive.
Rise Marie, this poem shows all what happens after a freefall+++10
This is a powerful write. Each stanza is fascinating. Your use of words are so apt, giving a vivid image. Undoubtedly a 10 and into my poemlist too
When no one showed mercy he became merciless and took his revenge. But it's better to forgive and forget. Another thoughtful poem by Rose Marie Juan Austin.
The smell of Death! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
He was thrown like a tin can/Kicked akin to a piece of slipper/Crushed beyond recognition....excellent use of simile! I adore the altitude of poetic imagination reflected throughout the poem! Lines like 'He conquered death', 'Licked his own wound' are absolutely immaculate! An amazing piece of poetry!
Thank you for your great comment, Dr. Dillip. Such a gem to my pen.
Hurt lingers and provokes thought through revenge is amazing.10
I am glad you liked the poem. Your comment is much appreciated, Kumarmani.
This is brilliant piece........thanks. anjandev roy.