Tuesday, November 7, 2017

When Hurt Lingers Comments

Rating: 5.0

He was thrown
Like a tin can
Kicked akin to a piece of slipper
Crushed beyond recognition
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Rose Marie Juan-austin
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Anjandev Roy 22 May 2020

This is brilliant piece........thanks. anjandev roy.

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Kesav Easwaran 25 February 2020

A hurt or an insult would bring the best efforts from some persons. Revenge doesn't recognize mercy. Good poem on true life 10+

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Anjandev Roy 07 August 2019

Licked his own wound.......brilliant.Thank u.anjandev roy.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 August 2018

The hurt catapulted him Into a warrior Wounded everyone No one could stand against For he showed no mercy........impressive lines with fine theme. Beautiful poem on revenge nicely executed. Thanks for sharing.

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The poem When Hurt Lingers is a creative and compelling composition that eloquently expresses the revenge motive.

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Robert Murray Smith 29 April 2018

Rise Marie, this poem shows all what happens after a freefall+++10

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Bipasha D 17 April 2018

This is a powerful write. Each stanza is fascinating. Your use of words are so apt, giving a vivid image. Undoubtedly a 10 and into my poemlist too

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Robert Austin 04 April 2018

A very moving powerful poem. Well constructed...10+++++

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Akhtar Jawad 02 April 2018

When no one showed mercy he became merciless and took his revenge. But it's better to forgive and forget. Another thoughtful poem by Rose Marie Juan Austin.

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Edward Kofi Louis 31 March 2018

The smell of Death! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 10 February 2018

He was thrown like a tin can/Kicked akin to a piece of slipper/Crushed beyond recognition....excellent use of simile! I adore the altitude of poetic imagination reflected throughout the poem! Lines like 'He conquered death', 'Licked his own wound' are absolutely immaculate! An amazing piece of poetry!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 11 February 2018

Thank you for your great comment, Dr. Dillip. Such a gem to my pen.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 November 2017

Hurt lingers and provokes thought through revenge is amazing.10

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 28 November 2017

I am glad you liked the poem. Your comment is much appreciated, Kumarmani.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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