Thursday, January 24, 2008

When Hunger Explodes........ Comments

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Do you know how it feels to be hungry
so many desires, killed to bury.
empty stomach, empty eyes
looking greedily to your apple pies,
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shiralley arzish
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Jazib Kamalvi 14 September 2017

A sublime start with a nice poem, Arzish. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Abha Sharma 21 March 2008

very touching and pathetic lines... empty stomach, empty eyes looking greedily to your apple pies, ................

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In the market, When hunger explodes Shiralley no one has been able to articulate the other side of the story so well, thanx for letting the truth emerge from morass of confusion

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Inspiration And That Is It 24 January 2008

This poem simply illustrates the mastery of poetess regarding the use of words and communicating the right context out of these words! Absolutely amazing and true!

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