Wednesday, December 21, 2022

When Humanity Is At Stake ~ Comments

Rating: 5.0

Dust rises from the humanity end,
world thought, what's the matter?
The blocks of race, caste, colour and creed,
all merged together like rivers in the sea.
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M. Asim Nehal
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Nosheen Irfan 22 December 2022

Thoughtful and thought provoking. Humanity and peace are the ultimate goals.

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Exquisite piece. "Wave of peace.. in search of the shore of love.." loved it. Top score

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 21 December 2022

Excellent last line but over all a wonderful poem

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MAHTAB BANGALEE 21 December 2022

Let's cultivate the sunlight of humanity; cherish the moonlit of humanity; take care the stars twinkling of humanity; make a open roof sky of humanity; let's become human and human

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Dr Dillip K Swain 21 December 2022

A wonderful poem on a great theme. Beautifully penned. Full marks.

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M. Asim Nehal

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