Friday, December 23, 2016

When Hope Was Green Comments

Rating: 5.0

with hope the spring anticipates
the world was a road to everywhere

I basked in the glow of a sunny day
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Barry Middleton
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Nosheen Irfan 26 December 2016

Awesome write. With the passing years, hope loses its color. Youthful energy is replaced by inertia of body n soul. A huge 10.

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Barry Middleton 26 December 2016

That's it but poets are lucky as we still have our poetry even as we grow old. Thanks.

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Paul Brookes 23 December 2016

Beautifully penned from hope to enuii

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Barry Middleton 23 December 2016

Thanks Paul but I think despair or sadness more than ennui. Getting old and illness can really do a job on hope.

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