Sunday, October 9, 2022

When Hope, Comes Tumbling down! Comments

Rating: 5.0

In less than 2 years,
Lies, the size
Of Volcanos,
Hot lave
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Sandra Feldman
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Evelyn Judy Buehler 10 October 2022

This engrossing verse delivers a powerful message, through elegant poetry, filled with undeniable truth.5 stars.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 10 October 2022

Never forget the basic foundations of the Great American Spirit: Hard work, and Faith, Respect, Love and Obey the law. Superb poem that excells in true honesty. Dearest Sandra, you have a beautiful honest mind!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 10 October 2022

But thru hard work and Faith, In a better tomorrow! So very true Respect, love and obey the law, The Great American Fighting Spirit. This beautiful poem excells in brilliance.5 Stars Full Score.

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Politics is ‘opportunism', Sandra. Every player has his own axe to grind…. A most pertinent subject, most poetically expressed

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