Sunday, November 23, 2014

When Hope Becomes A Prayer Comments

Rating: 4.9

A friend saddened by
World's perilous conditions and being
Full of compassion for human suffering
Remarked; on account of being atheist
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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 May 2018

It is an outstanding write on world's calmness and peace and a prayer for human hearts and betterment of lives. Brilliantly expressed and shared.10

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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan 09 December 2014

In a march forward of one human race Never lose hope and never stop to pray. A poem on the idea that prayer is the ultimate goal for salvation.Well expressed Well done Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan 09 December 2014

In a march forward of one human race Never lose hope and never stop to pray. A poem on the idea that prayer is the ultimate goal for salvation.Well expressed Well done Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

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Daniel Brick 07 December 2014

I could not predict where your poem was going to end - Would it endorse nihilist position that effort is useless? Or would it turn to an (unreliable) outside force? Or would the conversation wear itself out and gradually evaporates? I should tell you, I paused in my reading after the fifth stanza, later realizing that was the half way point. and jotted down these thoughts. I was restless. I could not think of any idea to add to the discussion except a free floating doubt. T-H-E-N I finished the poem and had a sea-change inside. It's not that I have any solution or even a brilliant comment. No, what happened is the poem as a whole, when I finished, restored my HOPE - and isn't that enough in such pefrilous times? Thanks to you for your sincere efforts!

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Akhtar Jawad 05 December 2014

To look at God silently and to remain hopeful and optimistic is definitely a more effective prayer. A nice thoughtful poem..............10

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Lorraine Colon 04 December 2014

Reading your words has lifted my spirits today. Such wisdom and truth are expressed here. I agree - if we wish only good for each other, is that not a prayer? Whether we believe in God or not doesn't really matter. This is our domain, we are in charge. What happens here depends on our attitudes and actions. Of course, prayer symbolizes hope. Sometimes we need miracles when we just can't seem to see a light at the end of the tunnel. So we pray. And I believe that hope is also a prayer. It's a powerful wish that we make, an emotional plea. Hope seems to have a power and a life of its own. That's why we must never lose hope. It can change the course of things, it can produce results. I truly enjoyed reading your words, Savita.

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Amitava Sur 25 November 2014

A powerful write with a deep insight and good wishes to live with peace. Hope and prayer words of great meaning Both spring from human heart As a reflection of human desire..... Thanks for sharing

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Valsa George 24 November 2014

His hope becomes a prayer to call Upon divine guidance and assistance With sincere love and devotion To light the path and give the courage To keep working towards new solutions. When our hopes are pitched in a supreme power in times of trials and tribulations, an ardent call rises from our heart for divine guidance and help! Then it becomes prayer! On some occasions, when our hearts are filled with gratitude, in humility we raise our hearts to that supernal power! That becomes even a better form of prayer! Very profound write, Savita!

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Asavri Dhillon 23 November 2014

Hi ma'am, its a really nice poem..! its just fantastic, Thank you for sharing.

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Emma Connor 23 November 2014

This is inspiring! Well done!

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Saheb Mohapatra 23 November 2014

ah! this poem is really poignant.............i am greatly amazed........thanks

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 23 November 2014

Nice poem- Guruwaani- Jado pher smay wich ghir jaawaan, hoye na koyee shaaraa vee, - hargheez meri manshaa ih nahi-rakhiyaan meri bhagwaan karen, Haan apne aap bacha lengaa, bal mainu itna daan karain- thank you

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