Monday, July 2, 2012

When His Soul Touched The Piano Comments

Rating: 3.1

When his fingers embraced the piano
something moved in me
I have never felt so free, so light before
His soul played the most profound music
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Kasia Fedyk
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Payal Parande 06 July 2012

i think i am in love with you mam this is perfect i want to say more but i think i am speechless..... i am reading your words on a piece of paper a beautiful, alluring sight the words which make me love, pray and eat to keep your readers breath just write do write just write.......love payal.....keep on writing

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Now this is Good Verse, in every facet & principle of contemporary poetics...From its crisp, tightly cropt linage toit's melodious ambience created in part by the smooth fluxion of the works structure...Very Well Done ~FjR~

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Savita Tyagi 05 July 2012

Beautiful! Love the last line. Says it all.

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Swetha Vanakayalapati 03 July 2012

very gentle............! ! :)

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Will Duchon 03 July 2012

Thank you so much, Kasia.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 03 July 2012

soul rejoices in divine flow intoned like flute whispering blue in void rainbow never reneges dropp of rain heart mellows by gentle rhythm from symphony, thought provoking write skillfully curved over the rune of longing,10+++, thanks for sharing

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