Wednesday, August 1, 2012

When Hearts Are Near, People Whisper! Comments

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Smile at me, when I return from work
Don't smell at me and turn in sulk
I may build the wall out of brick,
I may fix the pipe as a trick,
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi
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Khairul Ahsan 19 July 2013

When the hearts are near, people whisper, When the hearts are afar, people shout. Very true. I can hear your whisper!

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Khairul Ahsan 19 July 2013

When the hearts are near, people whisper, When the hearts are afar, people shout. Very true. I can hear your whisper!

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Elena Plotkin 16 July 2013

Well done. Superb job of showing married blue collar worker's need for admiration.

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Allemagne Roßmann 01 August 2012

Smile at me, when I return from work Don't smell at me and turn in sulk you are a working woman though not hundred percent deionized water.A Goddess Sita was also sued by her Godly husband.Normal women are more distrustful.They should not expect to be readily trusted.Trust is a temporal venture.Takes long time

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Eric Cockrell 01 August 2012

love this one... so very true!

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