Sunday, October 27, 2013

When He Finally Set Sail Comments

Rating: 5.0

From the shores of intense suffering
After being tossed about days and nights
Like a boat tethered to the shores of grief
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krishnakumar chandrasekar nair
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Neethu Prasanna 05 December 2013

This is one of the good poems read lately. I liked the way you paralleled the troublesome stage of his life to a boat struck again and again by harsh waves.

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John Rickell 05 November 2013

krishnakumar a wonderful dedication ' he went with grace as you wrote with grace John

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David Mclansky 01 November 2013

This is a remarkable poem. You have the gift, Honest Poem. David

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Philip Carter 29 October 2013

Beautiful and touching poem. Well done.

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Valsa George 28 October 2013

A moving tribute to your father in law, rendered with affection and pathos! Some people who reach the terminal stage accept the inevitable with grace and an astonishingly high level of inner elan! ! Thanks for reading my poem and commenting! !

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Unwritten Soul 27 October 2013

You know, dont know..now i let you know hahaha...this poem done beautifully, the metaphorical senses, poetic verses, and how it touched my heart reading the lines..this is very good job, loved it_Soul

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krishnakumar chandrasekar nair

krishnakumar chandrasekar nair

Thiruvalla, Kerala
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