From the shores of intense suffering
After being tossed about days and nights
Like a boat tethered to the shores of grief
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krishnakumar a wonderful dedication ' he went with grace as you wrote with grace John
This is a remarkable poem. You have the gift, Honest Poem. David
A moving tribute to your father in law, rendered with affection and pathos! Some people who reach the terminal stage accept the inevitable with grace and an astonishingly high level of inner elan! ! Thanks for reading my poem and commenting! !
You know, dont know..now i let you know hahaha...this poem done beautifully, the metaphorical senses, poetic verses, and how it touched my heart reading the lines..this is very good job, loved it_Soul
This is one of the good poems read lately. I liked the way you paralleled the troublesome stage of his life to a boat struck again and again by harsh waves.