When He Came Comments

that is really great and im so happy to bring its vote to 10/10, coz now it`s 9.9, so i must rush. be well dear, ur poems r full with special spirit

Hello Joan. This is a beautiful love poem, well written and speaking of committment. Your happiness comes through. I look forward to more like this, and when you have an even treater grasp of English, in which you are doing very well, you will be able to express yourself even better. Keep on writing. This deserves my ten. From Fay Slimm

A very nice piece and, i did read your message to me as well.Please, to write more poems and lines that touches many like this poem, YOU NEED TO READ A LOT TOO. Please, do read different ENGLISH books, newspapers, etc from different English speaking Countries to beef you up on this mission.Yes, you have the qualities of a POET.Do not give up and, keep on writing. Do greet the people around you too.Bye. E.K.L.

Angels inspired our lives...those kids...that's the reason we want to prolong our lives as they inspired us to let them grow...oh little angels.. great write...kabayan... Best Regards, Ency Bearis

We were so blessed when these angels came They lighted up our home... good lines these... kids are the real light and happiness in one's life...

True Love inspires life to live long.......10+

Candid love transcends beyond sensuality, it settles and hold a great family! A 10

Yes, Joan, love brings us out of ourselves and reveals us to ourselves that we may then give of ourself freely to another. Wonderful feelings expressed here. And may the love thrive and endure. Thanks.