When he looks at me
I feel caught in his gaze
But soon look away
Eyes glued to the ground, unable to raise
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oh i like it i especially love that last paragraph every girl wants that kind of love
that's the true feeling that we feel to someone we love.. great poem..
Touching and warm. I like the duality of the piece very much.
One of my Fav. of yours! It kinda reminds me of The Song of Solomon....awesome job!
Wonderful poem...... Very thoughtful.... I love the ending.... ~KRISTA~
Your stuff is so happy within the prime of possitiveness its hard to find decent natural tallent anymore that isnt spoiled