Monday, December 8, 2008

When He.. Comments

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When he looks at me
I feel caught in his gaze
But soon look away
Eyes glued to the ground, unable to raise
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Brianna Trombley
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Matt Burgett 02 February 2009

Your stuff is so happy within the prime of possitiveness its hard to find decent natural tallent anymore that isnt spoiled

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, , , , , , 17 January 2009

oh i like it i especially love that last paragraph every girl wants that kind of love

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Little Morning Star 09 December 2008

that's the true feeling that we feel to someone we love.. great poem..

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Ridge Cahill 09 December 2008

Touching and warm. I like the duality of the piece very much.

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Kimber Harrison 08 December 2008

One of my Fav. of yours! It kinda reminds me of The Song of Solomon....awesome job!

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Wonderful poem...... Very thoughtful.... I love the ending.... ~KRISTA~

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Brianna Trombley

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