When darkness is plentiful,
Or pain is abundant,
It seems hope is silent
As you soldier on.
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I like this quick poem; well written and smooth. The last two lines drives it home. Thanks for sharing.
Thank you, Thomas, for reading and commenting! Most of my poems are usually longer. This one showed me how much can be said in few words.
Thank you so much, Becca! Replies to comments messed up again- - I sure hope you get this!
An Ever So Beautiful Woven Poem! ! ! ! ! On Nature, Sunlight, And Hope! ! ! ! ! With Very Heart Warming Feel! ! ! ! ! Thank You Ever So Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! ! Endless 1OS! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++
An outstanding poem that sheds both light and hope in the darkest of moments. Excellent write!
An amazing write that gives hope. Beautifully crafted and well executed piece.
Thank you, Rose Marie! This one is 'hot off the press'- - I was sitting here reading and listening to music, and this poem just came to me- - I had to jot it down quickly, before I lost it!
Darkness of night humorously expresses the pain of life. But the darkness does not last for long as new sunny day arrives. Dawn brings sunshine for us to give us light. Light is wisdom and this carries mercy of God for us. Light breaks the darkness. Sunshine gives new hopes and we ever trust in God for his mercy. This is an outstanding poem...10
Your images of darkness, sunshine and the dawn relate so tellingly to the human condition. A poem of ultimate hope.
Thank you so much, Michael! Your sensitivity enables you to zero-in on the meaning behind my poem.