Sunday, March 4, 2018

When Grey Days Outnumber The Sunny Comments

Rating: 4.9

When darkness is plentiful,
Or pain is abundant,
It seems hope is silent
As you soldier on.
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Michael Walker 02 May 2018

Your images of darkness, sunshine and the dawn relate so tellingly to the human condition. A poem of ultimate hope.

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Thank you so much, Michael! Your sensitivity enables you to zero-in on the meaning behind my poem.

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Thomas Plotz 07 March 2018

I like this quick poem; well written and smooth. The last two lines drives it home. Thanks for sharing.

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Practicing Poetess 07 March 2018

Thank you, Thomas, for reading and commenting! Most of my poems are usually longer. This one showed me how much can be said in few words.

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Practicing Poetess 05 March 2018

Thank you so much, Becca! Replies to comments messed up again- - I sure hope you get this!

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Rebecca Navarre 05 March 2018

An Ever So Beautiful Woven Poem! ! ! ! ! On Nature, Sunlight, And Hope! ! ! ! ! With Very Heart Warming Feel! ! ! ! ! Thank You Ever So Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! ! Endless 1OS! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++

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Practicing Poetess 04 March 2018

You got it, Rini! Thanks for your insightful comment! :)

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Rini Shibu 04 March 2018

Wonderful poem..days of happiness follows the sorrow

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Richard Wlodarski 04 March 2018

An outstanding poem that sheds both light and hope in the darkest of moments. Excellent write!

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Practicing Poetess 04 March 2018

Thank you, Richard! I appreciate your comment very much! :)

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Lamar Cole 04 March 2018

This is a very good and very thought invoking poem.

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Practicing Poetess 04 March 2018

Thanks so much, Lamar! I always enjoy receiving your comments!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 04 March 2018

An amazing write that gives hope. Beautifully crafted and well executed piece.

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Practicing Poetess 04 March 2018

Thank you, Rose Marie! This one is 'hot off the press'- - I was sitting here reading and listening to music, and this poem just came to me- - I had to jot it down quickly, before I lost it!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 March 2018

Darkness of night humorously expresses the pain of life. But the darkness does not last for long as new sunny day arrives. Dawn brings sunshine for us to give us light. Light is wisdom and this carries mercy of God for us. Light breaks the darkness. Sunshine gives new hopes and we ever trust in God for his mercy. This is an outstanding poem...10

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Practicing Poetess 04 March 2018

Kumarmani, Thank you very much - - Outstanding! WOW! :)

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