When God Was So Alive Poem by Richard Wlodarski

When God Was So Alive

Rating: 5.0


We used to
Hold hand in
Such soft hand
Touching clouds
Whispering
To angels
When God was
So alive
Then we died
With One God

Thursday, October 15, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: god,memories,childhood
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
We grew into adulthood losing our innocence. And a tad of cosmic consciousness.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 15 October 2020

Described my feelings of walking home with Jesus after Sunday School- -absolutely had that ring of innocence - - to my pain, growing up I grew away.... now I seek Him without an innocent heart and soul. Truthful and painful write. Top marks, my friend

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