When Frustration Takes Over Comments

When frustration take position in driver’s sit, Will not grant peace even thousands candles lit, Peace and harmony are true essence and very fit,

Whole life time’s great work and achievement’s, Will be on vane if not proper or no movements, 10

People may have distrust and look suspicious, Earnest peace efforts may remain continuous, When gravity of situation remain high and explosive, Even mighty and might may not remain responsive,

People may have distrust and look suspicious, Earnest peace efforts may remain continuous, ........10

A good thematic poem, just check some grammatical mistakes.

When frustration take position in driver’s sit, Will not grant peace even thousands candles lit, happiness goers away...10

When frustration take position in driver’s sit, Will not grant peace even thousands candles lit, Peace and harmony are true essence and very fit, happiness goes away...10

When frustration take position in driver’s sit, Will not grant peace even thousands candles lit, Peace and harmony are true essence and very fit, then joy disappears...10

When frustration take position in driver’s sit, Will not grant peace even thousands candles lit, then common sense is lost...10

When frustration take position in driver’s sit, Will not grant peace even thousands candles lit, then u loose control over mind...10

When frustration take position in driver’s sit, Will not grant peace even thousands candles lit, then common sense is taking back seat...10

When frustration take position in driver’s sit, Will not grant peace even thousands candles lit, common sense takes back seat...10

When frustration take position in driver’s sit, u loose concentration wwhen under pressure...10

When frustration take position in driver’s sit, common sense disappear as soon as frysteration takes opvver...10

People may have distrust and look suspicious, but u loose sense when frusteration is there...10

When frustration take position in driver’s sit, Will not grant peace even thousands candles lit, it shadows the sucess for sure...10

great poem...it is based on true & real situation..hope frustration will vanish b4 its too late...and courage and faith would take its place....thnx 4 sharing such a meaningfull poem..

the context is significant..well written and narrated..nice flow to read...10