When Flower is red as heart is red
Fire as warm as and hotter than the sun afar
I felt deep and deep
How red it was
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haha short, sweet, says it all complete in itself i was reminded of another filipino poet here he said it does not need to be long as long as it is completely expressed nice poem. i will vote ten for it.
I like the brevity of this concept but with an impact. Nice job.