When Flesh Becomes Feeble Poem by Dorsey Baker

When Flesh Becomes Feeble



Flesh is like
a candle and its flame
burning hot
burning until
it can no longer burn
melting like
a snowfall
disappearing like
the footsteps
of a shadow
fading
like light from the sky
when sunset comes
weak like water
poured into a glass
strong like whisky
when it taste
the tip of your tongue
vanishes just
like a breeze
in the trees
as it goes
passing by

Thursday, December 13, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Julia Luber 05 March 2019

When flesh is like whiskey it makes the most sense.

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