When eyes meet
A spark is born.
Hearts are shaken,
Nerves are broken!
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Absolutely fine tuned All feelings, one by one Like being in a queue... Wonderful feelings Dear poet, You took us back to those days. Wonderful write. Thank you.
very well expressed indeed...I liked it very much...enjoyed it to the fullest extent..thanks 10+++=
the rich beat the poem has in fact is the beat of the heart in love!
Thats an intensely light-hearted romantic write...yea..the world needs lovers and soft music..in between hard battles.. Cheers. Subroto
A sweet poem of fresh new love. A delight, Ravi! '10! ' Best Wishes, Marilyn
'Two hearts in silent communion' - -and making melody too - - a fine poem and a 10 from Fay.
What happens when first love happens? I think this poem is a good answer. Very well written.
‘…The seeds are sown, /Poems are born! ‘ Beauty I say beauty …’poetry-love’ …‘love-poetry’ are but same…love finds full culmination in fairy poetry…thanks Sir 10/10 Ms. Nivedita UK