Friday, May 15, 2009

When Fallen In Love. Comments

Rating: 5.0

When eyes meet
A spark is born.
Hearts are shaken,
Nerves are broken!
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Ravi Panamanna
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‘…The seeds are sown, /Poems are born! ‘ Beauty I say beauty …’poetry-love’ …‘love-poetry’ are but same…love finds full culmination in fairy poetry…thanks Sir 10/10 Ms. Nivedita UK

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Vidi Writes 28 May 2009

Absolutely fine tuned All feelings, one by one Like being in a queue... Wonderful feelings Dear poet, You took us back to those days. Wonderful write. Thank you.

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Shashendra Amalshan 22 May 2009

very well expressed indeed...I liked it very much...enjoyed it to the fullest extent..thanks 10+++=

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Kranthi Pothineni 22 May 2009

Once again fully enjoyed the read. Its an amazing write.

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Indira Babbellapati 18 May 2009

the rich beat the poem has in fact is the beat of the heart in love!

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Subroto Chatterjee 17 May 2009

Thats an intensely light-hearted romantic write...yea..the world needs lovers and soft music..in between hard battles.. Cheers. Subroto

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Ramesh T A 17 May 2009

A dream of love should be like this! Wonderful poem!

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Marilyn Lott 17 May 2009

A sweet poem of fresh new love. A delight, Ravi! '10! ' Best Wishes, Marilyn

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Carol Gall 17 May 2009

and love is born wondrful poem

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Fay Slimm 16 May 2009

'Two hearts in silent communion' - -and making melody too - - a fine poem and a 10 from Fay.

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Sathyanarayana M V S 16 May 2009

What happens when first love happens? I think this poem is a good answer. Very well written.

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Naidz Ladia 16 May 2009

as if i don't want to stop reading..this is very nice...naizz

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a lovely romance there..expressive write sir

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Ravi Panamanna

Ravi Panamanna

Ottapalam- Kerala State- India
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