When Eyes Beckoning Comments

a poetry of great passion, a poetry of heartache, a poetry on way of life, a poetry on the beauty of a dream....marvelous words merging to come up with a very passionate piece...i love to keep on reading this....i never knew a heart could smile until i read this piece....a beautiful scenery is vividly captured in your written words...10++++++ as usual...and my vote....

I am impressed by your choice of word combinations. I find them perfectly aligned in this poem. It was a beautiful reading. GW62

A rich use of language and imagery. Take care. Warm regards, Sandra