When Everything You Possess Is Gone Comments
When everything you possess is gone:
You will be but a sign on a train bridge to jab the social conscience.
You will remain the name that someone associates with a debt, whether paid or not.
You with impunity will be unencumbered to fill your life with a whole bunch of new stuff.
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Signs of disconnect, signs of un-possess. Reads like a calendar of affirmations with a clear message of what is and is not important in the daily building of our life. Nicely done!
My sign is on a bus shelter, addressed to someone spending their waiting time filing away the wooden seat. BRAIN DEAD WOOD PECKER Is there a difference between remaining and waiting?
a sign on a train bridge to jab the social conscience...... you are a rare soul who comes to such lovely conclusions and lines as this...You will know that a largesse of heart is glimpsed in the tiniest act of generosity., , , , this is so perfect....tyvm for sharing... karen
You will know that kindness, truly is the essence of humanity. How are we going to be remembered and how are we going to remember ourselves? Great poem..10 marks...
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7/21/2025 5:41:29 AM # 1.0.0
To some it may appear to be a tragedy, losing material possessions but your poem reversed the negativity of this kind of thinking. Thank you for pointing out that which is essential. Very very good write.