Saturday, July 7, 2018

When Everything Is Gone, It Remains To Be Comments

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To be like the assorted flower,
Waiting for the first drops of rain

To be like the pale color fish,
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MARIE CLAIN
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Jazib Kamalvi 07 July 2018

A refined poetic imagination, Marie C. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Marie Clain 09 July 2018

What a beautiful and nice appreciation for my modest talent by being an budding poet. Im going to enjoy yours my dear Jazib. Best regards

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Dr Antony Theodore 07 July 2018

To be like the motionless tree, Waiting for the first breaths of the wind...like the bird waiting for the first ray of dawn.......... very fine figurative language and similes simply beautiful poem dear poetess. write, write, write. you have talent. tony..

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Marie Clain 09 July 2018

You are so much encouraging dear Tony. In my lonely time when my soul and spirit are sailing then the waves of feelings come. Thanks for your kindness and appreciation. Wish you a great inspiration too

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