Wednesday, August 10, 2016

When Eagles Fall Comments

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They will fall and not know why
Disaster ruled their treasured land.

As Truth and Faith was set to die
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Cynthia Buhain-baello
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Bri Edwards 15 October 2016

i saw a comment you left at a poem from John Westlake in 2014, and i had a little contact with you before then. let me read one of yours again! and i have read it. i'm not too interested in using or trying to interpret symbolic writing. i assume you are not talking about birds! ok, i assume you are talking about some country with humans behaving 'badly', who have caused the downfall of the government or society as a whole. shame, shame! bad humans! i like alliterations, so i of course 'loved' this: And pledged a partnership with Pain. i hope i never do THAT! bri :)

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 05 September 2016

When eagles fail and fall is not the scariest thing that can happen ever in the world as everything goes around..Thank you for sharing..

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Ratnakar Mandlik 10 August 2016

A beautifully envisioned meaningful and thought provoking poem acknowledging, (When) Soaring eagles shot with arrows Swift the fall, great the sorrow. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Cynthia Buhain-baello

Cynthia Buhain-baello

Manila, Philippines
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