When Dusk Kissed Her Feathers 👄 Comments

Simply superb lines and I quote: The symphony of lifeless heart Buried beneath, somewhere in the hard rock Singing the unheard songs of love As the sun went below the horizon

My Mediterranean sea calmed down And between the two my heart found solace....wo it's a lovely poem; love special; enjoyable; beautiful to read

Thank you for the invitation to read this poem, Asim! I must admit: Your love-poems are the best on this site; and, when I read them, I react spontaneously: I am moved by them, I live and feel profoundly any emotion, sentiment, and thought I once thought...Your poems make me feel my heart... You are truly a poet of great sensibility and wisdom; which, is a rare combination! A great equilibrium between heart and mind!

Two contrasts beautifully handled Where the sweetness of the nature And the coral bay resonated

beyond imagination at Maxus in a world of green

Great Imagery in your poem The love was in the air The fragrance very fresh As the spring emerged From the rocky heart's mountain The wings of dream took a flight Over the valley of love

Singing of the unheard songs of love makes this poem distinct

When the dusk kissed her feathers and the body was dancing in joy with love in the air what a beautiful atmosphere to enjoy.

How can one remain aloof when love is in the air.

Symphony of life! ! Over the valley of love. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

The opening lines is so beautiful that when the love touches someone he or she gets the feel as if love is in the air, love is under the ground, love is in the Sky and love is everywhere the entire surrounding only reflects the love all around..

What a fantastic ending to a beautiful poem where you left the readers to imagine that between the two could be sky and earth also it could be the two eyes it could be the two arms and it could be the Mediterranean sea and the nature itself.

Buried love is back to life and dreams are flying all around.Superb poem

So soothing poem. Where the sweetness of the nature And the coral bay resonated The symphony of lifeless heart Buried beneath, somewhere in the hard rock Singing the unheard songs of love

Singing the unheard songs of love sun blessed the horizon and then went up. This was the time of sunset and much beauty was perceived. Two hearts found solace with interesting notion. When dusk kissed her feathers amazingly pebbles scattered around. This poem brought up an interesting natural imagery with rhythm. An amazing poem is shared.....5 stars

Love is immortal and your poem time and again speaks the same but differently Hats off

Lovely poem. Full of love

.......my heart found solace........brilliant..........thank u, dear poet.....anjandev roy.

Very beautifully penned imagery poetry. It is really touchy. As the spring emerged From the rocky heart's mountain The wings of dream took a flight Over the valley of love Where the sweetness of the nature And the coral bay resonated The symphony of lifeless heart Buried beneath, somewhere in the hard rock Singing the unheard songs of love....these lines really beautiful.

The resonance of love and dreams is poetised here with apt images