Monday, May 22, 2023

When Doubts Condems Comments

Rating: 5.0

I have diligently gathered all of my poems
and I have weighed them for what they are worth
What was thought as gold, now I clearly see,
In the moment of test, they abandoned me
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Bill Cantrell
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Poetic Sky 05 June 2023

Niche poetry, I liked the theme, Full STARS **

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M. Asim Nehal 23 May 2023

We all have those moments when we feel inadequate. There is always that unbreakable dream. Excellent Poem, Bill.5****

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A beautiful poem that I think a lot of us could relate to. Stunning poetic expressions with great images.

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A very touching and poignant poem so beautifully expressed. There is always that moment that we feel we are inadequate. There is always that dream that never leave us. A dream that we could weave that poem we deeply loved and feel we have accomplished something. Yet, that dream is so elusive.

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Sandra Feldman 22 May 2023

That moment of glory you speak about and that rarely comes, is still waiting in you and will appear when you least believe it is near. For greatness is a miracle that could be locked, in even one sad tear. So don't give up, dear friend and poet, when the moment's right, you will know it!

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Bill Cantrell 22 May 2023

Thank you Sandra, a few years after I deleted all my poems, you were there with. Good advice..which I applied, thank you dear friend, you are a great poetess which I have always admired

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