Tuesday, July 6, 2010

... When Did We Last Live Comments

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When did we last live
i guess in some distant dreams
or the faint memoirs of childhood
playing behind the hills...
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Darrin Mcmiller Jr. 07 July 2010

I don't know if some of us ever lived, but reading this poem has to count for something because it speaks volumes of life. The disappointment of adults wishing they could go back to a time where people lived. This was a great poem. 'when was it we had a sigh/if the gallop of air is enough to survive why does voice choke' and this my favorite lines.

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Rabia Fazal 06 July 2010

Slam Nazia, You have written this poem nicely.It has been presented in a glamorous manner.Keep writting.

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