Friday, May 23, 2014

When Destruction Comes Comments

Rating: 4.5

Sleeping wide awake
waiting for what's to come

They will keep fighting
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Dave Alan Walker
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Geetha Jayakumar 31 October 2014

Poem with a great message. Very true said in few lines... They don't realise they are crying for what they have become They realise it too late. By the time destruction have already been done. Beautiful presentation. Loved reading it. Thanks for sharing.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 02 June 2014

Self destruction is vicious indeed. The lurking danger is vividly presented. Thank you.

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Hans Vr 24 May 2014

So true dave. A nice and strong poem. I hope that many people will benefit from the very good message inside.

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