Sunday, November 4, 2018

When Death Knocks At The Door Comments

Rating: 5.0

When death is at your door
and the sound of the knock is hard to ignore
when lost hope sucks out your oxygen
and death seems like your only friend
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Aqua Flower
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Bri Edwards 01 February 2020

well, I may be better off dead, but then i think.....................WHAT ABOUT THE REST OF MANKIND? WOULD IT BE " BETTER OFF" WITH ME DEAD? ? ? Nahhhhhhhhhhhhhh. Your Poet's Notes is worth considering. Consider the alternative! to MyPoemList bri :) p.s. nice wording and rhymes. something to think about.

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Carl Roussell 04 November 2018

A strong poem, yet the Poet's Notes shows the healing that can come through writing. Hope for better feelings to fill your thoughts!

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Aqua Flower 05 November 2018

Thoughts! First acknowledge....then kill them!

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Aqua Flower 05 November 2018

only the bad ones...lol

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Kostas Lagos 04 November 2018

! Why didn't I come up with this kind of verses? I'm soooo jealous!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 November 2018

Feeling of death has been astutely delineated. A beautiful poem on death and thoughts nicely executed.10

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Aqua Flower 05 November 2018

thank you Kumarmani for your comment on this gloomy one.

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