When death is at your door
and the sound of the knock is hard to ignore
when lost hope sucks out your oxygen
and death seems like your only friend
you dance with these thoughts inside your head
and think the unthinkable
Am I better off dead?
A strong poem, yet the Poet's Notes shows the healing that can come through writing. Hope for better feelings to fill your thoughts!
! Why didn't I come up with this kind of verses? I'm soooo jealous!
Feeling of death has been astutely delineated. A beautiful poem on death and thoughts nicely executed.10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
well, I may be better off dead, but then i think.....................WHAT ABOUT THE REST OF MANKIND? WOULD IT BE " BETTER OFF" WITH ME DEAD? ? ? Nahhhhhhhhhhhhhh. Your Poet's Notes is worth considering. Consider the alternative! to MyPoemList bri :) p.s. nice wording and rhymes. something to think about.