Tuesday, September 17, 2013

When Death Comes Knocking! Comments

Rating: 4.8

Death comes slowly
In silence
And pause at the door
No one hears it
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Geetha Jayakumar
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Krishnakumar Chandrasekar Nair 26 September 2013

And when he comes knocking Be civil to Him Praise his buffalo The crown of horns The big fat belly Then argue your point That his scroll may be wrong And that the dates are mixed up And possibly its the wrong address Point out your quarrelsome neighbour And may be, may be He A bit confused can go back With that horrid roll of rope and sack....

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Marvin Brato 19 September 2013

Well-penned, its the reality. Thanks for sharing.

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Noreen Carden 18 September 2013

Hello Geetha well done a great poem we are all just waiting for that call Thank you so much for your kind comments about my poems I just wish i had your talent for putting the right words together which makes your poems so special

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 18 September 2013

When death comes knocking, one must be ready. Do the things you want to accomplish. Let nothing be left to say i am not done yet. Beautiful poem. Thank you.

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Valsa George 17 September 2013

Death is the inevitable and inescapable reality of life! It is so near, but we like to imagine, it is so far! I wonder, if it has the glow of a sunset! A beautiful poem, Geetha!

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Lyn Paul 17 September 2013

Only once in a lifetime that is for sure. a great write with a great title. Thank You

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Neela Nath Das 17 September 2013

Our ultimate scene of life.None can spare it.So true and inevitable!

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 17 September 2013

Wow beautiful feeling lines are powerful and at last boldness to face/ Am waiting for him dearly! thank may lord bless you

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