Wednesday, April 22, 2009

When Death Came Calling Comments

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Not long ago in ancient time
It seemed so fine to bide in mime
As illness wrecked an image true
So saintly filled was twilight's hue
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Monica Kulal 27 April 2009

yeah cool.. u rhymm so well..wonderfull peom

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Pandian Angelina 26 April 2009

Death comes calling like a guest, but leaves behind sorrow till we rest! Beautiful poem done with soft brush strokes.

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rago rago 26 April 2009

A fantastic write. It gives complete picture as a meaningful one and thought provoking.

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 26 April 2009

A beautiful poem in rhymes...........Yes death is the cup bearer of our wine.........

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Joseph Poewhit 22 April 2009

Think you have it all, , , , , AND, , , , , , DEATH CALLS

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