Sunday, July 28, 2013

When Darkness Falls Comments

Rating: 5.0

The moon slides peeling the orange sun.
Seaward seagulls sign a truce of silence,
But cricket has not read the script
And bowls a babble to bats leaving crease
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Robert Dummett
COMMENTS
Beach Girl 19 September 2013

Beautiful poem. Gave it an excellent

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Richard Johnson 18 September 2013

Syllables are well chosen and carry music and good sound with lashings of meaning. Loved it a lot.

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Radhica Laukaran 06 August 2013

Absolutely Brilliant! ! ! Its imageries and flow...a choreographer's feast!

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