Tuesday, June 26, 2012

When Darkness Calls Comments

Rating: 5.0

There's an emptiness inside me.
It grows bigger every day.
It threatens to engulf me,
I feel lost, can't find my way.
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Mark Dillon
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M Asim Nehal 08 January 2016

Inspiring poem.....10

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Princess Lilypad 18 August 2013

Found it! I really liked this message of hope. Akin to my Sky High but in a different direction. You greet the new day, in my addiction I wanted to obliterate it, sleep it through. Anyhow, thanks for the recommendation, I'll get to reading some more Mark Dillion in just a bit. Thanks!

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Hazel Durham 30 September 2012

Really liked this poem full of strife then working through the darkness into the light! Inspired write!

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Valerie Dohren 01 July 2012

Great poem Mark, very meaningful.

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Captain Cur 30 June 2012

Liked this one Mark. Got to be a fighter and look through the darkness. You began the poem well then used the ship/beacon metaphor to drive your point. Good write!

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