Monday, June 11, 2007

When Daddy Comes Home Comments

Rating: 5.0

When Daddy comes home
I run and scream
To hop on your back
Possesed with gleam
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Zoe Abel
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Manonton Dalan 29 September 2008

this reminds me of my daughter, she is so happy everytime i visit her. we have a great time always beautifully written and i love it.md

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Red Blooded Black Hearted 21 October 2007

I love this poem. Great work!

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Kimberley Logan 14 July 2007

hey cici love your poem

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Jesse Tampa 19 June 2007

Wow, I absolutely loved it! For such a young writer your skill is well. Continue writing and you will only become better.

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