Saturday, February 28, 2009

When Crystal Hearts Are Broken Comments

Rating: 5.0

When crystal hearts are broken
You cannot make repair.
The warmth and love you cherished
Turns then, to cold despair.
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GREENWOLFE 1962
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Cristy Upshaw 08 June 2009

This is truly brilliant. I love the title, the flow, absolutely stunning.

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this was wondrous, the fluidity of your words seem to simply...i cannot describe it all i know is that it was wonderful to read and brought a light to my face Finally With Hope, Timothy Weiermann A Lone Troubadour

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Naidz Ladia 08 March 2009

rhyming of words are nice to read....this crystal heart is compared to the true and honest love...if trust, respect is never be a part of it, am sure that crystal heart will break itself..cheers naizz

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Laurie Hill 28 February 2009

This is absolutely lovely. An excellent poem, an excellent read 10+

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Tia Maria 28 February 2009

You just proved that Love & Light can still shine through a shattering experience! ! ! 10/10 - wonderful write Wolfey :)

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