When Clouds Collide Comments

Desire on fire needs to cool otherwise we look like fools. Great write.++10

I had a love at the first sight for this title, felt like stealing this title one day from you to write a series of poems on it. A lovely rain of freshness over the reader. Thanks Rini for such a poem and the Title. 10+++++ Subhas

Love spurs the clouds to collide with each other resulting in rain, cooling the earth.......it is only a poetess like you who can imagine and compose such awesome lines......

Karachi is situated on the shore of Arabian Sea, there are neither forests nor mountains, when clouds from bay of Bengal collide with the clouds of Arabian Sea, it rains and we see tales of the Arabian nights. The poem is about the collision of two passions that ignite fire of love and is a lovely poem.

Clouds fly in sky and collide amazingly there. Interestingly the spark of fire lights their love. You have drawn a nice lovable imagery in this poem...10

This is a very delightful and enjoyable poem.

You created another astonishing image! Great!