When Birds Were Leaving Comments
When birds were leaving
On each threshold the sun was praying
Like the last kiss before end run;
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- You said they're leaving; you did as well Right after them on wings of dream. Little by little on knees I fell A twilight shadow did dim the gleam. Beautifully crafted!
We start looking at the winter of life when autumn of life starts attacking the grenery of life. Birds come back to their nests after enjoying the adventures of flying that started with the bloomimg of colorful flowers. A beautiful poem.
On each threshold the sun was praying/Like the last kiss before end run............Fascinating poetic expression! I greatly admire the way you have used simile! Beautiful poem....10
Dr. Dillip thank you very much. Respect for you and your pen... dr. Riza
This is quite a beautiful poem on life and love! The imagery is vivid and strong and I love the ending! Nicely crafted!
Thank you Aqua! Apparently we are in the same poetic way. Love and loss, trying not to lose these are the escaping geese but remain in our hearts and minds
Nice work Sir.. reminded me How the Flocks of Birds go on Migration 1000s of miles to Warmer lands to bring new off spring.. and the story of Penguins that go to coldest of Place Antarctica even go walking! ! Thanks for this Poem and sharing Sir! ! 10+!
A nice write..... A wonderful seen of nature portrayed into fine piece.... Naila
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7/29/2025 10:39:22 AM # 1.0.0
Beautiful poem, sir! beautiful imagery! unforgetable imagery! only a peaceful heart can feel and depict. Great!
Jagdish thank you my good friend!