Tuesday, September 13, 2016

When Autumn Prowls Comments

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There at the eroding edge of summer
Autumn prowls
An unexpected chill
Hiding in the shadows
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Seamus O' Brian
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Tan Pratonix 05 October 2016

You really have a talent. Loved these lines: An unexpected chill Hiding in the shadows Of a twisted rooted elm. A leaf jettisoned Before I am ready... For 'eroding', perhaps some other word?

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Seamus O' Brian

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