Sunday, August 26, 2018

When Ashes Fall Comments

Rating: 5.0

Ashes blown away by the wind
Faded memories flickery like a candle burning until the end
Haunted echos bouncing off an  encravaced cave wall
Watching my steps so i thread lightly
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Tamara Turner
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Susan Williams 26 August 2018

Captivating lines about being lost.. the word flickery was absolutely the right word for trying to walk with a candle in one's hands. 10

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