Sunday, December 13, 2015

When An Ocean Dies Comments

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when an ocean dies
a mermaid cries
little swimmers
sink down and rest
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Chuy Amante
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Anil Kumar Panda 14 December 2015

The last stanza, ' dear sea we love you.... a fatal sin' is so beautiful. Nice poem. Liked it.

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M Asim Nehal 14 December 2015

Nice poem, death of an ocean never thought about.

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