When All The Trees Comments

Read this one for the second time and am still impressed. Read mine - Trees - Adeline

A composition that is both creative and compelling. Well done my friend!

A fabulous night time imagery poem, one of yor classic masterpieces. And ooh the rhyme scheme, awesome. So nice to read u again, Danny!

Love the tension this creates with the smooth flow and atmospheric rhyme of the first two lines (very Poe-like) followed by the last two lines of each stanza. 10+ from me!

Yup i think i can do that lol....had trouble pronouncing diurnal but the rest just flowed as i read aloud....i shall certainly ive it a whirl....london poetry corners brace yourself lol just touting for which looks best....

Rhyming nice the life on the surface. So many dimensions have taken their shapes by the fantastic imagery. Yet solitude I feel the key word unuttered single time yet. Perhaps it is the skill of match-making. Enjoyed the rhyming journey to illustrate the uniqueness.......Regards, Pranab................10+

ahhh... i just reviewed this an d said how much i adore this perfect 10 and some write and the sun shouldered on a hill is just breathtaking... then i went a tad loopy..... then i commented bout having to return to earth with a bump.... and it disappeared.... grrr....... love it... love it.... :) top notch all rounder... stashed in me favs

Danny im going to swear now! wait for it...Ruddy Gorgeous! ! ! ! ! ! I adore this one so so much...sun is shouldered on a hill....sigh.... This is absoposolutely my favourite ever....more than a 10 sits on your shoulders now... a might fine piece of canopy lace..........love it.... Bet you cant guess who's a tad enthusiastic on this piece.... cest moi... :) Sorry... calms down and walks of back to reality

Beautiful poem Danny, makes night-time sound delightful.