Tuesday, February 14, 2006

When All Is Said And Done Comments

Rating: 5.0

When every word is said and done
And silence meets its fate
When all the songs are cried and sung
And time decides to wait
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Ben Partenay
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Dee Daffodil 01 June 2007

Yet another lovely piece! This should be sung... Hugs, dee

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Jenna Lemke 23 February 2006

its a beautiful poem and it reminds me of my own writing well written ben!

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Mary Ann Najjar 15 February 2006

i like the imagery and the message of your poem. well done. i vote 10 for you.

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